Antivirus
Walking in my home
as if in the moon
floating here and there
am I touching ground?
Not well for some time
makes you to be like
a virus infected pc
works upside down.
You go to take a pen
bring back a rubber
sure the question arise
' are you mad or not'.
The world is moving fast
hard to get along
Pray to God to run
antivirus clean.
16 comments:
Pray to God to run a good antivirus on me and clean ... such a good analogy Rashmi, I know that feeling!
A really clever poem, well done!
I'm so glad you're feeling better x
ha ha. I'm not sure on what to say on the analogy... it was some change indeed! Just yesterday, I had compared life to a failed attempt at coffee making and now, I see it as some virus infected pc! Awesome!
The poem was nice, all in all. The blog is cool!
I think we all need an antivirus to run on us at sometime! Your lovely poem summed it up very well.
Good to see you back posting your words. x
good luck..
smart thinking on this.
*sigh*
If only it were as easy to cure a human of a virus. Nice analogy.
Nice work..
small little words here and there but overall it adds up to its uniqueness of thoughts.. well written! glad to be of acquaintance again through thursday poets- my posting this week~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/08/04/strength-of-faith/
You pretty much said what i could not effectively communicate. +1
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prayers..
bless you...
Haha! This was a fun witty read! =)
Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
Great Work of Creativity !!
It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!
Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
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some of my Haiku Collections
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and also, on my very recent Work as well
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/
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Cheers !!
Very interesting how you compared humans and computers in this poem. Thanks for sharing :)
good ride in the wave of poetry ocean! quite a catchy write.
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I really like this poem a lot. I wish there were an antivirus for the way I felt today. What a creative write! Thank you so much for sharing!
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This was wonderful. You might like to try an antivirus but not sure if you really need one. Great piece. My entry this week is http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/08/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.html this is my first rally and was invited here today only
it seems you are pc addicted! you reflected your state through simple medium of virus and anti virus.
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